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Wednesday, November 08, 2006

Deepest

Deepest

I beg the child
to listen the voice
whispering,smoothly
love it,love the voice

every step,child takes
more the dark,
embrace
leave the sun
apart with the deepest hope
filled the river with
questions and sorrow

-mm

3 Comments:

Anonymous ~ wpn ~ said...

kyaknya sich ok...
tapi...
gw agak oon niech klu soal puisi...
jdnya... daku binun kasih comment ape...
hehehe...
sorry yaa Wien...

10:56 AM, November 08, 2006  
Anonymous fahmi said...

heyyy,, man. setiap langkah manusia ditentukan oleh cara berpikir kita,, berpikir ketika kita harus berhadapan dengan problematika. but is one thing U must now... life is choice and we must take it.. good or better. in sweetest dream we can see our past, now, and future. in and outside belongs to you. mungkin lu gak tau maksud gw, tapi lu pasti ngerti jalan kehidupan kita sebagai manusia,, saat kita pertama diterangi cahaya kehidupan oleh sebuah kelahiran... itulah awal mula pencarian jati diri.

8:11 PM, December 05, 2006  
Blogger Reign of NIX said...

nice one fahmi :D thanks bro

10:58 AM, December 06, 2006  

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